A knock on the window.

Here's an excerpt from my half-completed script, November Rain,and this is one of my favourite bits. Ignore the technical specs.
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Haimle's Monologue: (face shot as she walks away from Sergio)
They always say it rains when the world turns its back on you.
Sometimes I wished, just like movies, that he would run after me and call my name.
But that didn’t happen. (Reverse shot on Sergio)
And I didn’t look back, for it would only shatter my dreams into smaller pieces.
I would be then left alone to piece them back together in desolation.
Or rather, I could leave those shattered pieces on the ground to graze those who may trample upon them.
I chose the latter. (Medium shot on Haimle, as she closes her eyes, shot of her tears)
(reverse angle on her back)
*Scene Change*
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